coyote moon

probably certifiable knowing

yet still watching the horizon

listening for knocks that never come

you vanishing smoke like

escaping into the winds

teasing tossing tidings via  moon

I howl

coyotes reply

knowing your scent

21 Comments

  1. sirenadelfirey said,

    April 23, 2010 at 11:15 pm

    You weave magic in your words. Thank you for sharing~

  2. adam said,

    March 13, 2010 at 2:16 pm

    Powerful flow. Read it a few times. Thanks

    • March 13, 2010 at 11:51 pm

      Ah, a poem that is read and re-read–is a poem that’s working. So I hope. Hi Adam. Thanks for reading.

  3. March 13, 2010 at 9:15 am

    Heart wrenching love poem! I hate it when they vanish smoke like into the winds. Great poem.

  4. lurainpenny said,

    March 13, 2010 at 2:14 am

    Wonderful.
    Hope al is well.
    Love,
    LuRain
    x

  5. lesliepaints said,

    March 13, 2010 at 1:14 am

    Beautiful. “teasing tossing tidings”. Love it.

  6. slpmartin said,

    March 13, 2010 at 12:02 am

    The flow and tone of the lines is just magic….well done.

  7. March 12, 2010 at 9:58 pm

    Sweet!
    “you vanishing smoke like
    escaping into the winds”
    Coyotes can and do disappear so fast.
    Gerardine

  8. wordwand said,

    March 12, 2010 at 9:35 pm

    hi thanks for your comment in my blog.I’m from casablanca, the most populated city in Morocco.as to the movie, I love it ; it’s a masterpiece.

    • March 13, 2010 at 11:23 pm

      I believe you, wordwand. OH what a city to live in!!! Lucky you. Thanks for coming all the way from Morocco to visit!

  9. wordwand said,

    March 12, 2010 at 9:04 pm

    a lovely poem, I love the aliteration in the sixth line.

    • March 13, 2010 at 11:21 pm

      Oh wordwand, I have to watch the aliteration and the consonance–very very tempting to overdo them. grins

  10. Doraz said,

    March 12, 2010 at 8:36 pm

    Right on this one! 🙂 Happy weekend!

  11. March 12, 2010 at 7:24 pm

    are you native people??

    • March 13, 2010 at 11:24 pm

      No I am not ‘native people’. Are you? (I suspect there’s a pun coming soon on this score.) grins.


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