Echostains has a new poetry challenge flying now at Bookstains. Yes, it’s all about Mona. Hmm. Surf the painting to Bookstains to join the play.
entering your court
alone, worn soles floor kissing
sharing silence smirk
own secrets lacking
you made all mysterious
pale reality
@wojcik
Artswebshow said,
September 23, 2010 at 12:07 am
Lol, that comments reads wrong.
i like the haikus.
Particularly
‘alone, worn soles floor kissing’
incompletehistory said,
September 23, 2010 at 4:39 pm
Agree with Richard, that is a sweet line. Brilliant haiku.
Artswebshow said,
September 23, 2010 at 12:05 am
i like it.
i’ve never actually seen it in reality.
would be interesting i think
Meg said,
September 22, 2010 at 9:22 pm
Singing Mona Lisa Mona Lisa. 🙂
bigsurkate said,
September 22, 2010 at 8:59 pm
What fun! I’ll have to surf on over, but not really in a poetry mood at the moment. Yours is great, Eva.
Poetry Challenge: Mona Lisa’s Smile « Bookstains said,
September 22, 2010 at 11:28 am
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echostains said,
September 22, 2010 at 11:24 am
Love the worn soles and the floor kissing:) Mona Lisa LOVES this kind of homage being paid to her! Is she mysterious? or is she inwardly smirking? or are she and her devotee both smirking? VERY good! Thanks for joining in! Adding it to the Mona page now:) and giving it a tweet!
47whitebuffalo said,
September 22, 2010 at 7:23 pm
Thank you very very much, Lynda. Poetry based on the first time I saw her up close and personal in an otherwise entirely empty room.
O–to be tweeted! It tickles! LOL.
echostains said,
September 22, 2010 at 11:45 pm
EH? I…… remember nothing..(.I do really :D)
😀 😀 😀
Oh I seeeeeeee you are talking bout Lisa (the moaning @£”!$%)
lol
lesliepaints said,
September 22, 2010 at 3:54 am
I like that part where you likened mysterious to pale reality, Eva.
47whitebuffalo said,
September 22, 2010 at 7:25 pm
Hi Leslie–thanks. And who has made all the mystery, eh? She or us? grins and winks
kirstyfliesfree said,
September 22, 2010 at 2:11 am
love it!
47whitebuffalo said,
September 22, 2010 at 2:14 am
Hi Kirsty! You too–come play with Mona over at Bookstains. Tap the painting and fly right in!
slpmartin said,
September 22, 2010 at 2:10 am
Very good poem given the visual prompt you have…enjoyed reading the poem.
47whitebuffalo said,
September 22, 2010 at 2:13 am
Serve up one of your own, slpmartin. All poets are welcome at Bookstains. Just click on Mona to get to Echostains’ Bookstains. Come poem play!