We were looking back at the path we walked
Hours. Late night. Talking our talk.
When I went down We were scared
Together.
When we looked into the night
Our only hope were the stars
Mornings
We sniffed the breeze together.
I with my laughter
You with your bark yawn
Laying in the dark
Now,
I hear you still as you curiously wonder
Why should I sleep?
@Cloud Man 2011
Rivenrod said,
April 19, 2011 at 1:43 pm
Good. Good. Good. The words are nicely arranged. As for the meaning, other than gleaning a first hit, I will have to live with it for a while.
My guess? That’s the intention . . .
Jingle said,
April 10, 2011 at 2:35 pm
beautiful..
47whitebuffalo said,
April 10, 2011 at 6:37 pm
Hola Jingle!! Merci. So nice to hear the sound of “you.”
lynnwiles said,
April 9, 2011 at 12:05 am
I agree that this and the one below are fine poems indeed. This another form of wanderlust.
47whitebuffalo said,
April 10, 2011 at 6:36 pm
Oh the lust to wander…..ooooo. I think it’s addictive for some of us. Thank you for enjoying both poems.
slpmartin said,
April 8, 2011 at 8:12 pm
Indeed a very fine poem.
47whitebuffalo said,
April 10, 2011 at 6:35 pm
Merci, Charles. You’ve been posting some heavy hitters lately.
eva626 said,
April 8, 2011 at 12:40 pm
this is absolutely beautiful!!! i am going to read it again and again! very nice!!!
47whitebuffalo said,
April 10, 2011 at 6:34 pm
Thanks eva626 for enjoying Cloud Man’s poetry so much.